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General Information
@Midevil is a scriptwriter who has been producing content since 2021, and who has settled most comfortably into the HMV/PMV and CGI genre of script writing; his most viewed contributions to the forum are his:
General Butch mega compilation which is a 4 hour long action-based CGI script.
Goon AI hmv it is what it says on the tin.
But the topic of review today is…
This was Midevil’s very first posted script, on April 4th 2021. It is 100% free to download. The video is 37:12 long, which any scriptor will tell you is a heculean task to script, even poorly. Midevil scripted this video twice. The script originally didn’t live up to his standards:
He revamped/updated the post on December 14th 2022; while I have not had the opportunity to try that original script from 2021, that funscript file size was 122.7kb and dropped to 118.8kb after the revamp suggesting that additional, unnecessary details were removed from the script.
The maximum speed in the script is 1364u/s, which is comically high. But, most actions in the script tend towards the 750u/s range. For context, 400u/s is about the limit of the handy while 750u/s is the upper limit of the OSR and similar devices.
In total there are 5041 actions in the script, which is roughly 2 and 1/4 actions per second for the full 37:12. Which, when you see how much of the script is filler/empty space, explains why the max speed is so high.
High speeds are not a bad thing, however, since devices automatically cap/curb actions to their max speed. Even a handy, with it’s ~400u/s max will run this script fine, it just will be running as hard as it can for 30 minutes. Maybe that is the secret that made this such a popular script; high speeds make people cum.
According to the post, this is an action-based script. Well, let’s see how well it matches the action.
Review
Part 1, Filler:
I find most filler in scripts to be boring and this is no exception. The fill is over Mia undressing, touching herself, bouncing up and down, and doing fairly interesting things. It’s a shame that this script missed the opportunity to add more detail to these sections of the script to add variety and repeatability to the experience. 50u/s of speed on a fairly long stroke does feel nice but it can’t keep most entertained for the ~10 minutes of foreplay at the beginning of the scene. I ended up skipping the majority of this part of the script.
In my own work
Shameless plug: In my own work, I’ve experimented with matching music in the scene for a more varied filler such as in this unreleased OnlyTeenBlowjob script I’ve been working on this week:
But absolutely nothing beats action based scripting for variety like I use in my recently published Lexy Panterra Script where I match the filler to her dancing in the lulls of the script. The reason most people don’t bother? It takes fucking ages to do.
Part 2, Blowjob:
Now, the blowjob scene is well done. There is a good variety and blend of different patterns and approaches that seem to match the scene in essense. IE: when she is working the top the script mostly does that, and when she is utilizing the full length it does that too. However, it does have some of that HMV/PMV scripting feel to it, where rather than the script being a homogeneous scene it feels a bit like individual, separate patterns have been glued together into a more complete scene, where the author hasn’t quite figured out how to transition between those patterns.
To illustrate my point...
You can see in the transition into the blowjob scene Midevil sort of overshoots, misses the fine details (like her re-gripping, popping it into/out of her mouth, etc) and adds additional strokes as if to try to cover it up.
That said, each individual pattern feels quite nice and there are nice details like popping strokes when the guy slaps her tits with his penis. Midevil is obviously a good scripter, since he gets details correct like start and end point (very important) and each thrust into her mouth is about twice the speed as when it is pulled back out.
Part 3, Riding:
Now starts the insane speed portion of the review. This portion of the script is insanely simple, but it feels awesome and matches the scene pretty much perfectly. It’s about 700u/s, 0 to 10 scripting that is similar to what an HMV or PMV scriptor would put at the end of a script to make you cum, except it’s about 4 minutes long with semi-regular breaks when the action dies down. If the blowjob section was like a 6 or 7 out of 10, this is a 10.
If you are downloading a script to make you cum, this will do it.
Part 4, From Behind:
See section 3, for comments on speed. I will say, by this point if the previous part of the script didn’t do it for you I’m not sure anything will.The main difference between that last scene and this one is that this caps at 90 and about 400u/s. Hey, here it is! The Handy Section!
I will say by this point the full length stroke is a little-samey. If you like it, you’ll love it. I personally skipped around between Part 3 and Part 4 based on my preference for what action was happening in the scene. That’s a nice feature, pretty much any section of the video can make you cum.
Part 5, Press:
This section is incredibly refreshing after ~8 minutes of pounding. It suffers similar shortcomings as the BJ scene early in the video but at higher speed and with a better view. That makes it significantly more forgivable since speed covers up mistakes in scripting. When you are fighting for your life trying not to come are you going to notice that a stroke that ought to be at 75 is actually at 80?
This section would really benefit from a more lopsided stroke. It would feel more like the pounding happening in the scene if the down thrust was signficantly faster than the upstroke, sort of like the twerking strokes I use in my scripts [pluggy plug plug].
Part 6, Riding again + getting lifted in the air???:
This scene is super weird, because Mia is like, floating … for half of it. My critique above applies here regarding detail, shifting speed on one or another side of a stroke for more emphasis, except in this scene it should be the opposite – she is being lifted and dropped very gently. The current stroke pattern is good, very servicable, but misses some of the weirdness of the scene. I’d like to know what it would feel like to have Mia float on my dick???
Dude is STRONG
Part 7, Finish:
Probably the most important scene (for many) is the finish. Let’s be real, if you didn’t come for 37 minutes of 800u/s full length stroking, bro you aren’t cumming. Lots of folks will skip to the end of videos when they feel like they are about to, so they get the authentic experience. This particular finish is between 92 and 20 at 800u/s and stays there for 6 seconds … but it’s immediately following like 20 minutes of 0 to 100 max speed pounding so that’s pretty forgivable.
Personally, I think 800u/s speeds are kind of unpleasant … especially at the end of a long session where the lube is starting to dry up. It also doesn’t quite match the action on screen if you have that particular kind of autism like I do.
Like I said before, if you aren’t cumming well before this, you probably aren’t cumming. This is 100% a finish you skip to at the end of a session. Which would be a great place to add a chapter in the script for easy skipping! Alas!
There is also some aftercare, which ironically is the where my favorite little bit of action-based scripting lives.
Perfect Action Based BJ lol
Final Words / Recommendation
Overall, it’s 100% a recommend.
- It’s fucking free. How much in this world is free.
- It’s really well constructed, Midevil has a great sense of pace (even if the transitions between patterns could be better in this script. His more recent work is MUCH improved.)
- It’s got the length and speed needed to be your 1 and done script. 37 minutes and you could climax at 4 or 5 different spots if you were ready.
- What a great fucking video. Literally.
I especially recommend this script to folks who like PMVs and HMVs even though it is not an HMV or PMV. I would say with confidence that this script is in the style of some of your favorite scripts even if it’s a completely different form. If someone wanted to, you could make a fap-hero out of this script and tweak nothing. Good work Midevil!
Try it out yourself here: Mia khalifa-Fucking in the bang room and tell me I’m wrong.