Looking to see if i'm on the right track (feedback)

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Hey guys I am very new to scripting and I’m still just getting an idea about how everything works. I’m using Funscripter and just trying out scripting on random videos.

Could someone just take a look at the first 30ish seconds of this script and tell me if I’m doing anything seriously wrong and give me some feedback?

Also my apologies if I’m posting this in the wrong channel

Video:
https://rule34video.com/video/3446394/bleach-hentai-yoruichi-shihouin-gets-fucked-from-behind/

Unfinished Feedback Script:
bleach-hentai-yoruichi-shihouin-gets-fucked-from-behind_720p.funscript (2.1 KB)

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what people like is very subjective around here. The spectrum is large. Ultimately if you just avoid the obvious issue you should be fine. Just make sure to test it. You dont want to be that guy that shares a script says “untested” and just lets everyone deal with their incompetence. From what I could tell the script you have so far could work. i personally dont like hanging out at the top end of the stroke but some do. to each his own ya know

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Appreciate the feedback. I’ll make sure to check scripts beforehand prior to posting finalized scripts.