Yo, I’ll take a little honest criticism.
Here’s one of my newest scripts:
https://discuss.eroscripts.com/t/cocoyogi-onlyfans-sucked-and-fucked-in-a-golf-cart-to-the-balls-deepthroat-and-almost-caught-twice/322031
Also I’m actually curious if I’ve gotten noticeably worse, so if you have time this is one of my most popular ones from an era long since past:
https://discuss.eroscripts.com/t/teenfidelity-melody-marks-to-watch-a-predator/56432
(and if you’d like a review on your scripts, the blowjob scripts are fantastic 
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thanks much!
Y_D 