Wanted: Sacrificial Lamb (Who wants to have their script(s) reviewed?)

Hey all,

I’ve just posted a template for writing script reviews [Script Review Template] and I am hoping to inspire folks to write reviews for other community members scripts. There are currently only 5 (FIVE) script reviews on the entire forum.

Because someone has to start in order for something to start, I am going to write at least one of these script reviews. But, I need help. It feels a little rude to just pick someone out of the crowd and go through their work thoroughly, so I am looking for a volunteers to go first.

Links will be provided to all the content reviewed, including paid scripts, even if the review isn’t 100% positive.

Who wants to have their work critiqued?

Let me know here or DM me.

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fuck it try this one i made awhile ago https://discuss.eroscripts.com/t/mia-khalifa-fucking-in-the-bang-room-revamp-and-updated/20690/35

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The hero we needed. I’m looking forward to jerking off with a fucking notepad for this one.

:nerd_face: :notebook:

EDIT: Folks, if you’re also interested in a review keep’em coming.

Yo, I’ll take a little honest criticism.
Here’s one of my newest scripts:
https://discuss.eroscripts.com/t/cocoyogi-onlyfans-sucked-and-fucked-in-a-golf-cart-to-the-balls-deepthroat-and-almost-caught-twice/322031

Also I’m actually curious if I’ve gotten noticeably worse, so if you have time this is one of my most popular ones from an era long since past:
https://discuss.eroscripts.com/t/teenfidelity-melody-marks-to-watch-a-predator/56432

(and if you’d like a review on your scripts, the blowjob scripts are fantastic :folded_hands:)
thanks much!
Y_D :dragon:

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Ok, you’re next. :skull_and_crossbones:

It’d be awesome if this spirals into a bunch of folks retaliating writing reviews about other people’s work.

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Your welcome to review my scripts

Me too:

https://discuss.eroscripts.com/t/coco-lovelock-and-madi-collins-60s-cafe-action-pmv-rewind-sync-community-event/314915

Done!

  1. Fuck you bro, I needed to test a script tonight so I could publish it tomorrow and I can’t now. All tested out.

  2. Thank you for being first.

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Done!


The fucking thumbnail is beautiful

This is the last review I am writing for people who volunteered to be reviewed. From now on, if I write a review it’ll be because I found someone I wanted to give some attention to, or because I thought whatever I have to say was worth saying.

@yakuzadragon if you want to review one of my scripts, feel free. But it doesn’t have to be a tit-for-tat I write a review for you so you write one for me sort of deal. I’d actually prefer if you (or anyone reading this) would go out and write a review for someone else who is deserving of some attention.

The goal is to get more people to write script-reviews, not just me and whoever I happen to review writing one as a response haha

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I tried your script and it is fucking awesome. Really cool rhythm and pattern that I could probably write something long winded and boring about, but I feel like most folks on here already know your stuff is awesome. My goal going forward is to highlight smaller producers. Hopefully someone else can be persuaded to write reviews of the obviously good stuff and explain to everyone why it is obviously good.

If you just want some feedback, you could speed up / make snappier the last 30 seconds of that script so it has some sort of “finish,” right now I could probably loop that script for an hour and be quite happy.

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I don’t mind if you take a look at mine :blobcat_blepwink:

I dabble a lot with extreme tags, so be warned, you can choose anything you would prefer, but if you don’t mind futa, try this one, https://discuss.eroscripts.com/t/lunapmv-hmv-futa-breathplay-public-release/294247

or if you don’t mind pokemon furry content, you can also try this one:
https://discuss.eroscripts.com/t/smugbluefaun-penny-x-eeveelutions-patreon-request-public-release/315663

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I might write a review about what you’ve just posted, but only if the scripts are so good they make me want to write about them or so bad that I’m feel the need to tell people about it lmao

Maybe someone else would like to try their hand at writing a review about your stuff?
looks at the person reading this message
That’d be sick.

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Oh fuck i didn’t notice that until i posted, that’s my bad xD
No worries mate, you don’t have to do it, i was just volunteering like the others :people_hugging:

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How about this, I will write a review about one of your scripts if you agree to write a script review on some other (not me) script maker you like. Can be anybody. Can be any length.

*I’m definitely good for it, I just wrote like 3k words about yakuzadragon on a whim. I’ll do a good job. Actually while I’m here, offer is open to anyone. Just say the word.

Thanks for the quickie review.

Btw… Your review of Yuka is fucking amazing!

I hope your style or template takes off~

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Thanks, I appreciate it. Vlad made the template the default for the script-review section.

Do me a solid and write that under the review, as soon as that thing is off the front page it’s going to be so buried people will never see it lmao.

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Very well, i will accept your offer :saluting_face:

At the moment my schedule is a bit tight so it will take a while, at minimum, by next week, so take your time as well, no rush :blobcat_flower:

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