The following review is thanks to the noble sacrifice of yakuzadragon. Wanted: Sacrificial Lamb (Who wants to have their script(s) reviewed?) - #4 by yakuzadragon and is the last of my “reviewed by request” series.
Before I begin, there is some general advice and guidance in this review that is applicable to all scriptwriters. I hope, even if your name is not yakuzadragon, you find some of the information below useful, educational, or at least entertaining.
Topic
@yakuzadragon is a scriptwriter who has been producing **100% free scripts ** since 2022. He has built an eclectic collection of scripts from nearly all genres and categories, from action-based POVs to CGIs to HMVs. Yakuza has a little something of everything. All his scripts are made by hand, frame by frame just “like how grandpa used to script.” His most viewed contributions to the forum are:
MewSlut- Leave my Boyfriend Alone – a pov facefucking scene of some renown.
SisLovesMe/DadCrush Blowjob Edits – 42 gbs of Blowjob edits. Literally just hours and hours of FREE blowjob scripts.
Nagoonimation - Tifa Rave – A CGI scene of Tifa getting “railed by soldiers”
TeenFidelity- Melody Marks- To Watch A Predator – a 45 minute threesome video with a twist ending; we will talk about this video in particular later in this review (because yakuza asked me to.)
He has created 62 free-script topics in total and 0 paid scripts; but you can buy him hookers and beer here: https://yakuzadragon.gumroad.com/coffee.
bonus script
My personal favorite of his scripts is:
https://discuss.eroscripts.com/t/canaryprimary-tsunoda-gets-a-raise/96420
General Information
This script was created on June 29th, 2026. It is one of the first that yakuza has scripted using a Ulanzi dial device.
This script took him roughly 5 hours to script using this new device. So, 
[disclaimer] some of what I have to say about the script might be influenced by his new workflow.
The max speed of the script is 973 u/s which is a fairly reasonable upper-limit for OSR2 devices or other comparable machines, though even for those machines anything above ~800 is probably faster than they can actually move. (This 973u/s is located at 1:58.351, during a portion of the video where she is stroking with her hand. There are some other over-sped sections such as an 800u/s stroke or two at ~12:20.) This speed suggests that, despite being tagged for the Handy and tested ON A HANDY, this script is probably not optimized for that device, since the Handy can only reach max speeds of 400-600u/s. Or maybe it’s not optimized for faster devices (they’ll go too hard and too fast) and you only get the real vision if you are on a Handy. Idk, fuck you.
Yet another massive L for the Handybros.This flick alternates between slow speed blowjob scenes and mid-to-high speed riding scenes and is fetish content for folks who are into exhibitionism and free-use (despite not having those tags. It does have the GOLF tag though lol) It is scripted to be action-based (match the movements and actions in the scene authentically) and is 14:39 in length.
The Finish (spoiler warning for the vid)
This script does not have a “finish” as they get caught on the golf course at the end of the video. I genuinely think that yakuza might have a preference for ruined endings, as you’ll see later when I talk about the TeenFidelity video…
Review
Part 1: Blowjob Sections
@yakuzadragon does a lot of things really right with this script; he is really good at doing the most important thing a scripter can do – he absolutely nails the alignment of the peaks+valley points with the action on screen. Novice or lazy scripters try to save time by skipping the frame-by-frame “grandpa” approach, but during slow scenes (like BJs) it especially matters and one or two frames difference will lead to the feeling that a script is dragging or speeding ahead.
Because he scripts frame by frame, each stroke has a different length and speed which is important for “real-feeling” action-based scripts. Yakuza also tries out adding vibration to add a bit of variety to the scene, to varying degrees of success.
I have a minor gripe with the vibrations for the blowjob scenes, since a lot of them are too shallow to accomplish much more than act as a noise-maker (not ideal at 3am when you are trying to write a review) and are sometimes misplaced for the action. Generally, my opinion is the vibration from a gag should happen just before and during the moment you hear the sound, and the ones in this script are consistently a little late. (You just about see what I am talking about on the timeline of that gif above.) That said, some of the vibes are really well done like this one at 1:37 which is placed well and does actually move the toy enough to do something.
One thing that I’ve noticed from trying out lots of yakuza’s scripts is that he can be a bit inconsistent in his use of certain techniques in his scripts (such as vibrations); in other words, he may decide that for one action in a scene the technique will be used but will miss the opportunity to reapply that technique again later in the script for similar action. For example, here is a short (probably not comprehensive) list of gagging sections that do not have a vibration on them at all:
Gag at 1:31
Gag at 2:20
Gag at 9:00
Gag at 14:12
There are other details that are included at one place in the script but are missing elsewhere. Just one example:
A pop/high speed upstroke is missing at 2:06 when she pops him out of her mouth, but does occur elsewhere in the vid.
This inconsistency is definitely noticeable. In this case, if you like the vibe, you’ll definitely miss it when it doesn’t happen and you were expecting it to.
Now what I’ll say next is probably not the most valid critique since each scriptwriter has to make choices about the amount of time and effort to put into each script they create… However, I know yakuza is capable of making absolutely killer and extremely detailed stroke patterns that perfectly match the detail of the scene. Just compare these blowjob patterns for two very similar blowjobs both made by yakuzadragon:
I think the above example shows a bit of the exchange between quantity and quality when it comes to how much detail can reasonably be incorporated into the script. Longer scripts, in general, are less detailed. And trust me I know how much it sucks to work on high fidelity scripts for longer videos: my recently posted BJ scene with Yhivi took me two months to script and about 30 hours of work – mostly on the basic up-down funscript. Nearly every script can benefit from having more intermediate points between their peaks and valley and this Cocoyogi script is no different.
Part 2: Riding/From Behind Sections
The non-BJ sections of this script are easily the best part, even if they are less interesting to talk about. The really simple straight up-straight down pattern works great for these sorts of scenes, and (whether intentionally or accidentally, due to where the peak+valley points just happened to fall because of frame-by-frame scripting) there are sections that are lopsided speed-wise. For example, between 5:10 and 5:50 the script slams down much faster than it lifts giving a lot interesting “texture.” See below:
Similar to the blowjob scenes, if that detail was intentional, it is missing in other appropriate sections where those “slams” would have added a lot of interest to otherwise samey up-down movement.
That said, does it still feel great without that detail? Yes, of course it does. It is just missing some of that je ne sais quoi. Which, great news, is the topic of the next section.
Part 3: The “Free-Script” Ethos + Writing with Style.
Personally, the thing that I love about Free Scripts is that, because no one is paying for them, scripters can sort of just do whatever dumb shit they want. Some of my favorite scripts of all time have little moments in them that can catch you sleeping if you aren’t ready. They can be expressive, unique to an author, and match “the spirit” of the video they are scripted for. To give a fantastic example, @Bekscript created this Minus8 warioware script that, if I can say so, is fucking stupid (meant in the best way).
Two things about this example script:
- I could tell you @Bekscript created it with a blindfold on. (As in, if I had a blindfold on… not that they had a blindfold on while making it. Nevermind.)
- The “vibe” of the script is as silly, lighthearted, etc. as both the scripter and the original video.
The artistic and expressive part of every great script is in the small details, experimental “features,” and techniques that are ladled onto scripts in excess. I think the great thing about free scripts is that they allow you to do whatever you want, really, and put your thumbprint on a script without worrying about mass appeal.
So, who is @yakuzadragon and does this script feel like a script he would make? Eh??? I don’t know about y’all, but when I go onto a script and I look into his eyes and I read the shit-posts he carefully crafts under each script …
…my expectations for flavor are high. This Cocoyogi script is like 70% there, but needs something surprising in it to really set it apart from the deluge of other fairly generic free scripts that you can get in bulk from other, less interesting scripters. Whenever I download a yakuza script, it feels like I’m getting a handy from a clown in a dumpster behind a Denny’s (not sponsored yet*) so my advice, if you’re reading this, is to channel that energy into the scripts and in your choice of videos. You’ve done it before…
Part 4: The Clown is Washed, L Bozo; Comparing with an old classic
So why is this script a piece of high-art, a classic, a must have addition to the collection and the Cocoyogi script not? Well, this hour long script hits all boxes that the much shorter script missed, and it feels like it was made by a slightly unhinged clown. There are these great suprising elements scattered all over the script; just to show off two:
Yakuza scripted the spanking into the vibration pattern so you actually feel that detail.
This one is dumb, but I like it. Slapping his dick while it’s in her mouth is represented in the script.
There are hundreds of details like these two in the script (I’m not going to show them all off, cause it’ll ruin some of them, go try it and find out yourself.) And the funny thing is, techinically, it is a much worse script. The peaks and valleys are messy. Yakuza gets distracted when there are two penises on screen (haha get fucked that’s funny) and will sometimes forget which dick he was just scripting like here at 36:03 where he scripts the right dick for the handjob at the start and then swaps to the left one for the BJ:
But, because there is so much interesting and varied shit happening, you don’t notice or you quickly forgive those little mistakes. I think that’s what makes this script one of the greats and why so many people have found it over the years.
A really fucking stupid analogy
It’s sort of like this: if you were at a buffet and there was a hundred different things to eat, you wouldn’t care if someone brought some fucking bean cassarole or something because look there’s cake and pizza and shit; but if someone puts a plate of spaghetti in front of you, but randomly there’s some bean cassarole mixed in there, you’re going to notice.
Also, the choice in video is really important to consider when scripting. Does this video feel like a yakuzadragon video? Fuck yes it does. Especially the fucking ending.
Final Words / Recommendation
Overall, I 100% recommend yakuza’s scripts. Not necessarily because they are all amazing (there are only like 2 scriptwriters on this forum I would recommend completely) but because he’s the personality-hire of the forum. He’s just too damn likeable … and his scripts are pretty good too. Compared to his oldest work, like this MyLittleHugot - Girlfriend Sloppy Deepthroat Blowjob script, the two scripts I talk about above are miles and miles improved. And, of course, everything he puts out is fucking free. How much in this world is free?
My hope is that what I’ve written here inspires those who read it to try to add more to their scripts to make them less generic. Go and actually add their thumbprint to new scripts. Especially free-scripts! Go do dumb things in free scripts. It may be your destiny.
Thanks for reading, and go try out the scripts yourself and tell me I’m wrong.
), I have few outlets for my manner of speaking, especially in terms of porn. NONE of my friends are comfortable talking about it. So I like to run a bit wild on it sometimes, I even take little notes while scripting of dumb jokes or turns of phrase to put in the description.